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Review:AntigoneBlack says:
I loved that you took on a Regulus/OC but didn't make him all light and fluffy. He was real, and he felt the pain of what they were doing. I loved that.

I do think that one line was confusing. I am not sure if you wanted it this way or not. The line is: And for her, even though she won’t be able to enjoy it. For her memory, then. It doesn’t matter any more. Sirius – the locket – R.A.B. – Kreacher …" Even as I reread it, I wonder if it needs to be changed. I understand it the second time through, so don't pay me any attention.

The OC was interesting, even though we saw her only briefly. I think that it was a wonderful little ficlet, and you did well writing a gender switch piece. It's really not as hard as you'd think, you just have to have a go with it.

Author's Response: Hmm, that's a good point - I guess I kind of wanted to show the disheveled state of his thoughts with that line, but it does still sound a little choppy, doesn't it?

Thanks so much for the kind words, glad you liked it!

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