Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:Fuzzy_Slippers says:
Hmm, I wonder who the Death Eater is? Another great chapter. I really like how you describe things; it's almost like . . . hauntingly beautiful.
The plot is obviously beginning to thicken, what with the Death Eater's pledge for revenge. It's nice to read something darker; something that isn't just a romance, you know? This story seems to have just the right amount of foreboding and suspense, so far. 10/10.

I'll try to make myself useful while I'm writing. 'port key' should just be portkey, no space. : ) And 'They had been taking for a bit . . .' Bit of a typo. So if you want you can fix those. I hope I'm not poking at the little things, but I love my reviewer, Elsie, who points out when I slip up, so I figured I might do it as well.

Anyway, onward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you. I will definitely go fix that. I swear I typed Portkey, silly typos. Please, feel free to point them out. If I don't know about them I can't fix them.

I'm glad you are enjoying the fic so far. Yes, the plot thickens and will continue to do so. :D I love interesting fics with lots of twists and turns.


Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

Examples:
  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Repeat the number: 881
Submit Report: