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Review:www_meat_org says:
I think you did a great job for this being your first Next-Gen fic! I really enjoyed it. Plus, I think the story was very unique and it kept me interested. You seem like a very poetic, descriptive writer and I really like that. Especially because you actually manage to do it well. In the paragraph where Teddy looked out the window, I could actually see it. You did a great job describing it because that's exactly how I would describe looking out of my window at night.

The only thing I would fix was the part when he first meets Seth. I'm not actually sure why, and I'm sorry I can't tell you, but it was hard for me to keep focus during that part. Also, I think you may want to consider explaining the meaning of all of it a bit better, unless you want to keep it open to the reader, which I understand.

Thank you for requesting a review!
~Casey (aka Vegirl123)

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