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Review:Indigo Seas says:
Here as requested! ^.^

Goodness, this was just... beautiful. Really, truly, beautiful. I mean, there are only so many stories on HPFF that are poetic and dreamy and just... a great read. This is definitely one of them. The style was just magnificent, and so... refreshing! I've never read anything like it before! Ever. So kudos to you for writing such a thing.

I think my favorite line would have to be: "Bring me back a star, bring your captor, your Hades, a star." Like I said earlier, this whole piece was just very poetic, and this line, in my opinion, highlights that. So great, great job on that.

It was short, but I don't feel like you left anything out. The flow was good. I also really enjoyed all the Greek references thrown in there. That added a lot for me. And the chapter title! Ha. That made me laugh. :) You tied everything together, which was great.

10/10

Best,
Rin

Author's Response: Oh, Rin! Thank you so much, I was so iffy about this piece, you have no idea. Seeing this review really made my day. Especially because you appreciated the style, and that line! One of my favorites, it was, after the first line and the last. I was also worried about it being too short, about not having touched on everything, so that it wasn't makes me feel a whole lot better ^_^ As for the Persephone references, I'd been meaning to write something with that motif for a long time, so when I realized that Narcissa was a Persephone figure, I threw it in along with the moth. The chapter title made me giggle, too XD Seriously, though, this review was lovely, and I really am happy that you liked it!

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