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Review:AndrinaBlack says:
That meeting between Sirius and Regulus was brilliantly done and really emotional! What I like best about it is the way they interact and how their childhood knowledge of each other mixes with the present to show more how they really care about each other. I just realised that a lot of your characters are shown in how they interact with Sirius because you write Sirius so much, but this way you get the characters really right. At least they seem to me just how they should be. But, back to Sirius and Regulus, it really feels heartbreaking to see them so close but unable to really show how they feel.

I like the line: "No way, Lils. I'm not playing 'let's dissect Sirius Black' with you tonight." They do that occasionally in your stories, don't they? And I like those moments, because they often show what Sirius and Lily's relationship is like at the moment and what they think about each other. And in a way this still comes here although he says that, though more in his mind. I love this one as well: "Fitting, he thought, that the woman that could best calm him had infused herself with a calming herb." Just because it's humorous and made me chuckle.

The talk about the scarlet moon gives a nice touch of mystery to the story and of course connects the first chapter nicely to the title. And I love it in the end how Sirius is still his careful self when they kiss and tries to protect Lily so much from himself and his enemies.

What a great start of a story again! I'm happy to see you are writing a Sirius/Lily once again and I can't wait for the next chapter! :)

Author's Response: *hugs* Thank you so much, hon! You always write the sweetest reviews and I appreciate you taking the time out of your busy schedule to review for me. Thank you!!!

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