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Review:DarkLadyofSlytherin says:
I absolutely love how dark and sweet this chapter is. I never pictured Sirius to so dark and brooding, but I rather like that he is in this fic. I also really like that Lily doesn't care that Sirius wants nothing more than to shelter her from the hate and pain Voldemort and the coming war will bring, while she only wants to keep - by the sounds of it - a man she truly cares for (maybe even loves) safe.

I'm one of those people who loves as much detail as possible, and while I was reading this I wasn't quite sure where it was taking place. All I can gather is that it is somewhere with a wooded area, and a pub (so I would imagine a town or village). My instincts tell me they are in Hogsmeade, but without being told so much, I really can't be sure.

I really hate (and love) that Sirius is pushing Lily away when all I want to see him do is let himself be loved the way he rightly deserves. Bah! Boys! lol

Great chapter, and I can't wait to read more. There is more right? :D

Author's Response: Oh, thank you for such a kind, thoughtful review! I actually left the location open on purpose. I couldn't decide if I wanted it to be Hogsmeade or somewhere else that I'll use later in the story so I purposefully took out some identifying markers. Amazing that you picked up on that!

I appreciate you mention the way Sirius treats Lily too. It's been quite awhile since I've written them so it's nice to hear that it came out the way I intended.

Thanks again for the kind review! *hugs*


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