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Review:JLHufflepuff says:
I'm so glad you posted this. The first section is my favorite simply because of all the angst and relationship issues present. I love the way you depict the two brothers, as well as the atmosphere of danger with Death Eaters lurking nearby. I think what really amazes me about this part is the characterization of Regulus. You show him as the evil, nasty Death Eater, but I get the sense of his existing love for his brother and desire to protect him even though they don't share the same loyalties. It's that kind of emotion that could build up to him doing what we know he did.

I love the way Lily can understand Sirius so well. The painful, conflicting emotions he feels because of her are just amazing to me. You convey them perfectly, and they just make me go all gaga fangirlish, not so much over Sirius but just in general! Their kiss was very electric. That's just the first word that came to my mind about it. The way you bring up so many demons of Sirius's past is entrancing as well.

Also, I LOVE the feeling of foreboding all the talk of the war creates. You have the Death Eaters lurking closer and closer to Sirius's world and all the people he cares about...

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