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Review:redherring says:
I can't believe I missed an update, especially when it's such a great chapter! My bad xD

Astoria, again, is fantastic, and Valerie and Vienna certainly seem like interesting characters! My only suggestion with them, though, is that you sometimes call them by their full names and sometimes by nicknames - it's only a small thing but it can be a bit confusing, and it might be easier if you just stuck to one name for the most part rather than constantly switching between the two options.

I loved how you compared Draco to Mr Darcy! That made me smile. I can't wait to meet him properly and see how he and Astoria get along.

Anyway, I really enjoyed it! Brilliant chapter, and I can't wait for the next one :) 9/10.

Author's Response: Better late than never :D

Thanks so much for the suggestion, every time I would type their name I would think about if should be switching or what -- that's really helpful.

I was a little worried about the comparison, but my inner, extremely powerful and rabid Jane Austen fangirl took over and I really, really couldn't resist. Glad you liked it. :]


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