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Review:confusedlover says:
very lovely.

i thought that you did a beautiful job on this piece. i have read a few Founder's stories- not too many but enough- and thought that this was an amazing take on Rowena's life. your descriptions were simply amazing as was your flow and i am very impressed with your take and imagination.

you were definitely period accurate for this and for that i am simply astounded. most of the time writers do not bother with things like that but i could see that you were really very driven and for that i congratulate you. you didn't write this halfway; you wrote the whole thing as it should be written and that is a wonderful thing that you should be very proud of.

your OC was very nicely written. he didn't really have a lot of development throughout the story but i could definitely tell that he was somewhat developed when you added him into the story and that was the way to go with a story like this. he seemed to fit the personality of a man betrothed to a beautiful princess and so i have absolutely no complaints with that either. he seemed to be very well written and that is something that i honestly can't get enough of in a story.

overall, i thought that this was a wonderful little one-shot with a very unexpected and depressing end. as soon as Hemlock challenged Erik to a duel though i knew that something was going to go unbelievably wrong. wonderful job. i am very impressed. once again, feel free to come back to my thread anytime you wish.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

I loved this, it made my day. :]

I'm so glad that you could find so many things to compliment. :D

Thank you so, so much!

I really appreciate it.

--Emily


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