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Review:Liza says:
This story just keeps getting better :)
This chapter was really good in my opinion cos we got to see james and albus a bit more-and scorpius of course :D because i will always love those guys. :)
The writing flowed so well the whole way through, it was sucha nice chapter :)
Cant wait for five days from now :D

Author's Response: I'm glad you think it keeps getting better! I try to keep it that way :P

I like to work on the characterisation of everybody, not just major characters like Rose and Scorpius. I love James and Albus they're so fun to write because they're such likeable guys. Plus I always just thought the Weasley and Potter family's would be like one big family, they'd have a big bond. I thought the guys especially would be pretty protective.

I'm relieved you thought it flowed well because it was ended up being a bt patched together :P It originally had an entirely different second half but I moved bits to other chapters, deleted some, edited some and I was worried it might be a bit disjointed.

I'm so pleased you're looking forward to the update! Thanks so much for the lovely review, I really appreciate it :)

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