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Review:Jemione says:
It's not Hegrid, it's HAGRID. And didn't they quit Care of Magical Creatures? Again, lots of typos. You could just say "... Dean asked after all the first years were sorted" instead of the unnecessary announcement.

I don't have a lot more to say. I strongly suggest that you get a beta, it would make the story a lot easier to read. There are lots of great people that offer help over at the forums, as well as helpful threads with tips on how to make your story original.

I hope this helps! Keep going :)

Author's Response: like i said before, i'm not a good speller and i should have checked up on his name. sorry.

i really don't understand what you're talking about of "unnecessary announcement"

i'm currently trying to find a beta. if you could suggest one that would be really nice!

thanks for reviewing and i hope you keep reading so i can see what i need to change and get help on. you helped a lot!! THANK YOU!!

JR Nite Dragon

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