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Review:DeaVanity says:
This was very interesting, though now I wish to know what exactly happened x). I mean, I understand but you know... I want the whole story, hehe. ^^

I must say that the story is original and that's cool. Though I don't know what could I possibly say that wasn't mentioned already concerning grammar and story flow.

I like the characterisation of Teddy and his longing for the carefree days when he was younger. And since he is a Gryffindor it would be madness if he didn't go exploring ;D (I'm talking about this sentence: 'For a moment, he stood before the door, uncertain of whether he should turn around and return to his common room, or brave the unknown and discover a room that perhaps no one had found in quite some time.'

All in all, it's a great story and I'm glad you requested that I review it :) .

~ DeaVanity

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the wonderful review. I'm very glad you liked what I have written, and that you like Teddy and his wistful ways. The description was my favourite part to write. It was so much fun writing this fic.

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