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Review:Clair Clementine says:
I thought this story was pretty cool! Your description was amazing! Especially when Teddy was first walking through the school halls at the beginning of the story. That was fantastic!! I thought the idea and plot of this one-shot was really cute. Though, I might add I think there could've been a bit more explanation on the ghost that was apart of Teddy. Perhaps thinking of some creative way it could possibly be him, Teddy. I was a bit confused on how it worked that Sethh was Teddy, but I still like the idea and would advise you maybe futhering the idea more and explain it a bit better :). Also, there could be room for more of explaining how Teddy felt apart of him was missing. That would help to I think.

But overall I did really enjoy this story. Your descriptions were very moving and totally realistic. I really liked it! Great job!

Clair :D

Author's Response: I am sorry the part with seth was so confusing and short. It was not my intention to confuse you or anyone for that matter.

Though, I am glad you enjoy the description and everything else about the fic. It was so much fun to write and I love hearing back from the readers :D

Thank you.

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