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Review:timeturner says:
This was an quick, interesting read. It moved so effortlessly from one snapshot to the other than I could almost envision this as a movie trailer, if that makes sense.

I honestly don't know a great deal about this character so I don't feel comfortable trying to give out blanket opinions on characterization. However, I can say that the clips you've chosen are seamless and paint a whole picture of a person struggling with many different time periods in their life. The background theme of waiting helps consolidate the entire piece together which works well and provides a nice avenue for you to reach into her mind and you've done it exceptionally well.

I particularly like the way you have her waiting for something that she know won't occur. The earlier clips provide a good indication of what she expects to occur/knows will occur and you balance that well at the end of the story where she continues to wait even knowing she'll face disappointment again. Very nice work.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for this insightful review, timeturner. It means a lot (:

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