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Review:timeturner says:
Lovely descriptions. You've painted a great picture of the current Hogwarts that puts the reader right into the hallways with Teddy. I know you are concerned about the lack of dialogue but I think it works well here. It adds a mysterious undercurrent that you wouldn't get if he had someone along with him on this adventure.

I found it interesting that he was having to sort out the historical details of the past war. Whether you intended it or not, this actually brought other characters into the story by making me wonder why they were keeping something so monumental from him. And, of course, if that was the case why he needed to be protected from such things.

Anyway, I enjoyed the story tremendously and felt you did a fine job crafting an atmosphere that fit perfectly with the plot line. I think you have a good basis for exploring more with Teddy or other next gen characters if you so choose.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the lovely review. I'm very glad you enjoyed the story and the descriptions. You're right, I was very concerned about my lack of dialogue, though everyone seems to say it works well with what I've written.

I really didn't intent for it to bring other characters to him so to speak, it was just how the words formed in my head and how I knew I had to write it.

Thank you so much for the amazingly thoughtful review and praise. I really do appreciate it.


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