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Review:Jane_Volturi says:
That was utterly FANTASTIC!
Ok, so i know i said that about the previous Dumbledore chapter but i have to say, despite the fact i despise many fanfictions told from Lucius malfoy's point of view, this is a clear winner among this callaboration, it was genius.
Characterization was amazing, everyone, everyone was in character. Lucius Malfoy, i could sense his cowardice yet you showed his determination to save his son, to save his family. So determined he would go to the lengths to finish the Dark Lord himself, brilliant. And Narcissa was her same worried self, just as determined to protect her son. Bellatrix was written very well also. I really enjoyed how you wrote her, her devotion and love for the dark lord just leaked off of the screen. I really hate the fact JK decided to kill her off, i don't know why, i just get the feeling it shouldn't have happened, not the way it did, her character was too layered and disordered to be killed off, she should have returned to Azkaban. I really enjoyed your characterization because everyone was so in character and i could really grasp the emotions running through the words you wrote, understand every thought and memory Lucius had so easily and you know what, i'm ever so shocked this hasn't got the right amount of reviews it deserved because this was truly fantastic.
The plot was outstanding, obviously JK's ideas but you made this your own, i really enjoyed this chapter, i can't find fault with it at all. Your writing was outstanding and your description was perfect.
10/10
Katie

Author's Response: Thank you very much.
I wrote this chapter several months or a year ago, and I remember it being quite a challenge to write. I tore up a lot of drafts. The idea of "encapsulating" a character this complex in a one-shot was -- sorry to repeat myself -- quite a challenge.

I was fortunate to have received many more reviews (which I wish I had backed up). However, there was a computer meltdown that caused me to lose a number of them. (That isn't to say I don't wish I had more; and I really appreciate the thought.)

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this chapter, and for your very kind words.


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