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Review:Jane_Volturi says:
Wow, i think this has got to be perhaps my most favourite chapter of this fantastic collaboration. I mean, the thought and effort that must have gone into this chapter, it was truly brilliant.
Firstly, the characterization was perfect. We'll start with the young Aberforth. He always gave off the impression that he was hot-tempered and ever so slightly arrogant, you really reflected that off of his character through you writing in a way that i could place myself in that secene without knowing any better and be positive the person speaking was Aberforth. The way he reacted to his sister's death was so realistic and beleivable, i felt so sorry for him in particular. Gellert just treated him like he was Albus's stupid little brother, and albus was too blinded with affection towards Gellert that he didn't realise how far apart he was drawing from his younger brother. I'm surprised it actaully took his sister's death for him to realise. You showed his realization so well through your writing, how quickly his mind had changed thorugh that moment. And Gellert, you showed perfectly the divide between him and Albus; and how power hungry he really was.
The plot was fantastic, despite the fact this was JK's original idea you carried this scene of perfectly, i couldn't have done a better job myself, this has got to truly be the best chapter yet of this collaboration, it really has to be.
The Spelling, grammar and Punctuation were all perfect and your writing was phenomenal, i really envy your writing style actually. Well done, this chapter was brilliant. Without a doubt the best one yet.

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