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Review:Jane_Volturi says:
Wow, this was most definitley my favourite chpter yet. i love theway you to that whole ancient magic theory from 'Harry Potter And The Philosiphers Stone' and worked on it adding that whole God thing into it. It was a really stange yet original idea and i'm glad you decided to include it. It makes this story more different, more unique in a way.
The characterization was brilliant, everyone was in character, especially Harry. He was unsettled yet determined to carry out the task he would have to face to defeat Lord Voldemort. And i liked that doctor gut and the way you decided to include Ceceliain this as well.
The plot was quite alternate universe in a way, because you're not so much meddling with JK's plot more than adding things to it and making it all your own.
There were one or two slipups with your grammar where you jumbled up your word classes but your Spelling and Punctuation both seemed perfect.
Overall, a really enjoyable chapter to read.
10/10
Katie

Author's Response: Oh, I'm terribly sorry that it has taken me so long to get to this account and see your review.

I'm so glad you enjoyed my strange take on this chapter. I was convinced after HBP that Lily's wand had played an important part on Harry surviving when he was a baby. Of course, I was wrong but I liked the idea so I decided to write this from that perspective.

I just love mythology so I thought including these elements could be interesting. I feel extremely flattered about this review. Wow!

I'm especially pleased that you like the characterisation. This was my first attempt at writing in first person. Harry is my favourite character so I thought I try writing from his point of view.

It was a very long chapter but I couldn't really reduce it without cutting stuff off. I'm so pleased you really liked it and that it didn't bore you despite the lenght.


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