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Review:Jane_Volturi says:
That ending was so good, Ginny definitley showed him lol.
Ok, firstly charcterization, i loved the way you werote Ginny, she was so in character, yet you showed a more weaker side to her, as though she was inferior for once. I'm glad because most people usually describe Ginny as being perfect so this was a good change for once. Usually i don't tend to read Ginny Weasley fan fictions but this one was surprisingly good, i could really step into her shoes and place myself into her position. and Stephen, he was nothing better than a dirty cheating rat, i'm just surprised Ginny didn't realise that sooner, no matter, it was still a very realistic relationship. He was trying to use her and she wasn't having it. And that last part, where Harry gave her that look my heart just melted, the best scene in this chapter i think.
The plot was fantastic, it wasn't based around Harry for once, you showed a chapter of Ginny's life where she was going through a lot which is very different from what i usually read from Ginny Weasley's point of view.
Spelling, grammar and Pun punctuation were all perfect, descriptive writing was very good (Brilliant writing style by the way) and overall this chapter was very enjoyable to read. Well done.
10/10
Katie

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