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Review:Jane_Volturi says:
Wow, defintley my most favourite chapter so far.
There was just one teeny tiny problem i had with the characterization. Bellatrix was fine, you explained well her devotion to Lord Voldemort, how he intrigued her. Voldemort however seemed a tad out of character. It was just some of the language he used, the way he spoke, or more accuratley his dialogue, no matter, i still liked the way that you wrote him.
The plot was also very interesting, easily woven into JK's stories, i could really relate to Bellatrix and step into her shoes, brilliant job there.
Grammar, Spelling and Punctuation were all perfect.

You have a very promising writing style but i think with a tad more practice you could make your writng even better, still, there was a good amount of description in there, everything was easy to read.
Overall i really enjoyed this chapter, great job.
10/10
Katie

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