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Review:Jane_Volturi says:
I'm slightly frustrated at the moment because i just tried to post a review on here but it had been so long that i'd automatically logged off so here i am writing this review again lol.
I'll be completley one hundred percent honest in telling you what i think because i find that is the best way to let the authors know what a fraction of the audience are thinking.
To start off with i've never actually read a fanfiction from Kendra Dumbledore's point of view but as this chapter progressed i became increasingly interested in her character, and by th time the chapter had come to an end it had quite an unusual impression on me.
Firstly your characterization was absolutley phenomenal, there was a pinpoint accurate balance of personalities in here which i think is considerably important to have in a fanfiction. Kendra Dumbledore was very easy rto relate to, i could really step into her shoes and place myself straight into her position. You showed such a troubled side to her personality, it was different yet ever so realistic. It showed the harsh realities of life some people have to experience which in this case is the unpleasent fate tha awaits poor Kendra. Reading this really shines a different light on the whole Dumbledore family History, and i think you described beautiful Kendra's true feelings and emotions. And her grandmother, i loved the way you included her in there in such a way she was a symbol. Yes, i understand it sounds ever so slightly crazy but i really think that her grandmother's character symbolised doubt, she was the reason for Kendra's constant doubt and sense of insecurity, she told her never to trust anyone, she could only trust herslef. And Percival, he sort of symbolised escape, the way he showed Kendra she could trust him, that he loved her and cared for her. So yes, perfect characterization in my opinion.
The plot, the plot wove so deeply into the Harry Potter series, i was considerably shocked by the amount of fact you placed in there, enough to be considered a missing fraction of Albus Dumbledore's history, but also original at the same time, in a way you made it your own if you get what i mean.
The Grammar, Spelling and Punctuation were all perfect (no other word for it) and your descriptive writing was spot on, the detail and description this chapter required you managed to carry out both professionally and realistically, brilliant job.
My overall impression consists of many things. Firstly shock that i was actually intrigued by a character i didn't care much for. Then i was also mildly depressed because after placing myself in Kendra's shoes i realized she was leading a life os misery and woe. I also found it very enjoyable in an upsetting kind of way, it's a difficult one to explain which proves you have brilliant writing skills if you're able to do that.
10/10
Katie

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