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Review:Jane_Volturi says:
Well, despite the fact this chapter was quite uneventful i still really liked it. I couldn't help but feel sorry for poor Remus Lupin. You described well his feeling of being an outcast and how miserable he truly felt. I really like the way you stuck to the facts yet made it into your own story, you delved deeper into his thoughts and emotions and i could really understand how he was feeling, really place myself in his shoes you know.
I didn't like his father, John seemed like a terrible father to be quite honest with you, but i still enjoy the balance of personalities you showed in here, it's always good to balance the chapters out.
The plot, again, you wove it so cleverly into the Harry Potter series, i really enjoyed the way you layered it through the years you know. You did a geat job at that.
your grammar, spelling and punctuation all seemed spot on, and your descriptive language was phenomenal as always, brilliant chapter, i really enjoyed it.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad to hear you liked it... :)

I based most of my description of Remus' father on what little we knew about him from canon - that he had said something to offend Fenrir Greyback thus provoking him to have his vengeance by biting his son. From the moment I heard/read that, I imagined him as a proud, dominant figure that couldn't admit a mistake and couldn't quite handle the consequences his actions brought. So, I don't quite see him as the worst father out there, but he wasn't likely to be voted father of the year either... :)

As for my grammar, I owe it all to the amazing reallyginny who beta read this chapter.

Thank you so, so much for this wonderful review. I appreciate it immensely! *hugs*


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