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Review:Jane_Volturi says:
Wow, i think this is my favourite chapter so far. It's probably because Charity's not had much of a scene in the Harry Potter series, she was only briefly mentioned in the order of the phoenix and had a scene in the first chapter of the seventh book. I like the story you've set for her and the way you describe her thoughts, i can grasp her emotions without any difficulty at all. She seems brave and certain. wanting to do what she beleives is the best. She seems quite kind hearted and secure. A very interesting character you've chose to write about.
The Plot wove into the story better than i'd have expected, i just really liked how you made her your own character yet everything was so perfectly realistic. I'm ever so glad you chose to write a chapter from her point of view, fanfictions including Charity are scarce on this website.
Descriptive language was phenomenal, i've already explained in previous chapters you provide the chapter with the perfect amount of detail and description and i really admire your writing style, you seem to now what you're doing which is good.
Spelling was brilliant, as was punctuation and grammar, usually people alawys manage to make mistakes somewhere along the chapter but this was perfect, you have good Beta's.
Overall i really enjoyed reading this, it was different, original and enjoyable. Favourite chapter so far.
10/10
Katie

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