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Review:Pretty Purple Pelican says:
I totally have to commend you for writing in second-person. I'm a little too terrified to attempt it myself. You might want to go back and check, though, 'cuz there are a couple times when you slip out of it. There is also a consistency mistake when you mention a butterfly floating outside the window, even though it's the dead of winter. I would replace it with a snowflake, maybe. This was a really sweet story to read right before I go to bed, though. I think it's nice that you've show Dumbledore's many flaws, and your writing flows very nicely. Well done! :)

Author's Response: Like I said, this is the first time I wrote in second person- not many people tend to do it, and I wanted to see the effect it gives to a story. Yeah I probably did mess up a bit with the tenses and everything...it gets kind of confusing writing in second person and everything! Thanks also for your suggestion about the snowflake! I'll keep that in mind when I write next time :) Thanks again!

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