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Review:onestop_hpfan18 says:
Hey, Leslie here to review as requested, and I'm so sorry it took me so long; my laptop crashed on me a couple weeks ago and I just got it back on Friday. Anyway, on with the review shall we :D

Characterization: I think you did a marvelous job with James II's characterization, and I can easily see James as being the one to stand up for someone who is getting picked on because I always pictured him as being caring and nice while at the same time still being a practical jokester. And I really liked the relationship between him and Lia that you created, it's nice to read something different for a change, especially when it's written as lovely as this.

Flow: I had no trouble at all following along with what was happening as it flowed seamlessly, and you stayed on topic, too. I don't think you strayed at all from the plot. It's well-written and intriguing with each sentence.

Overall, great job! I really did enjoy this one-shot, and make sure you stop by my review thread when you've posted the novel length fic that goes with this. 10/10

Author's Response: Awww! YAY! Leslie, thank you so much! You truly made my day. For some reason or other, this one-shot did worry me, and I'm not so sure why, but you really boosted my confidence with it.

Thank you sooo much! xD

-Drue

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