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Review:Nordanvinden says:
Great start yet again, I did actually like the one before too, but this is better somehow!

I apologize for any harsh criticism that I might have voiced prior the editing of this story, and if I know myself then it will probably happen again, because I'm quite a nit picker when it comes to writing and whanot, especially typos and grammar mistakes! I'm fairly sure that I've mention something like this earlier, oh well!

Anyway, as I said; this first chapter shows a great deal of improvement, which is very good, I still couldn't help but notice a few typos and grammar mistakes, oh well, never mind, I guess!

The plot is great as before, same goes for the character portrayal and character interaction, of course! And it's all well composed!

Cannot wait to read more, to see what you might have changed and whatnot, so please update soon...

Author's Response: Thank you for your review this one was a lot nicer then the last time you did and made me smile.
I'll update when I can.
Thanks for the review

xoxo pure angel


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