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Review:dennisud says:
Its been awhile that I read this one but I fell in right from when I stopped.
Like the "new" trio's dynamic but this Lisa seems like a combo of the canon Hermione/Luna/Susan. Now I like the pacing and the way its throwing Dumbles and the others off track, plus I think in their 2nd year add Luna especially with Lisa to help her in Ravenclaw.

Please update more though I see that the length of chapter can be daunting!

Author's Response: Hello again!

I'm glad you found your way back to the story easily, and that it still pleases you =)

True, Lisa is becoming a mixture of personalities. In my opinion, part of the magic of the original books was creating characters that while somewhat incomplete, were the embodiment of regular people's traits: the accidental hero, the scholar, the fun-loving guy, the nutter, and so on.

I also agree with the need to post more quickly, since I hate to wait for updates in the stories I read! Anyway, next chapter will be shorter yet more action packed.

Oh, and I wasn't adding Luna until fifth year as in canon, but it would be a good idea to save her some grief =)

Again, thank you for taking the time to post your kind words.

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