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Review:LovlyRita says:
Hurray, an update! My evil upon evil plan worked!! haha!

So I loved this update! I especially loved the kid's comments on Snape's robes, and how you described them as the vampire wings of a bat or something like that. It was very well, done. I loved how the kids also questioned if snape's robes were always like that. They are often described that way, aren't they?

I also like the exchanges between Draco and Snape. It's very authentic. Snape seems so sneaky (wow alliteration) in the way that he already "knows" that the cloak isn't up in the tower.

What a well thought out mystery! I do wonder who the killer is, and I can't even dignify this story with a guess because it will be horribly wrong! Once again, as always, I am completely enamored with your writing style and your dedication to detail!

Thanks again for updating your story, I really appreciate the time you took to write this chapter, and you've done a brilliant job, as always. Also, sorry it took so long for me to come leave a review!!

-Ash

Author's Response: Yes, yes, the evil plan made the gears in my head start going again... or rather made me feel guilty for half-abandoning this story. One of those two. :P

There are accidentally two comments on Snape's robes, which I didn't notice until finishing the chapter. But since there was a lot of Snape in this chapter, it seemed to fit that he'd be the one that the kids would focus most on. And the books do describe him in that way a lot - it's funny how many times he's referred to as a vampire. XD

It's great that Snape and Draco are coming along well as characters. The Slytherin perspective is lots of fun to write, but I was worried that I was exaggerating both of them too much, making Snape too Snape-ish and Draco too much the spoiled rich kid. So I'm glad that you like both of them here. :D

Haha, I haven't decided who to make the murderer yet, so you're quite welcome to guess. It might give me a good idea. I'm playing with one right now, but I'm not sure if it will work out at all.

Anyway, thank you very much for reviewing this! It really meant a lot that you had recommended this over the site podcast. I couldn't believe that you'd liked it that much! ^_^


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