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Review:Tinkerbell01 says:
Hey Gabby!
Thanks for letting me know you updated! I'm glad you found my thread at TGS. The one at the forums was just too overwhelming with people requesting non-stop and TGS is much more calmer.

I dunno what to say hun! You're chapter seems amazing once more. You describe everything so vividly and clearly, which makes it easier for the reader. To picture things as if we were actually there. I loved the flashback with Polly. She seems so cute and adorable. Makes me want to get into the story and pinch her cheeks! :P

I love how the house elves are defending Alanna's leaving. There are words that I want to use to describe it, but it's late and I should probably be in bed. :/ I'll think of them after I've left the review, no doubt.

I might've seen one or two mistakes, but that's it!

I'm sorry I don't have much more to say, but it's true. You're writing amazes me everytime.

*Alicia

Author's Response: Yeah, I had a thread on HPFF last year and it just became too much. I remembered that you liked this story, but I hadn't updated in so long that you probably forgot about it, so I popped in. =]

Oh, Polly. You may or may not see more of her, I haven't decided yet. But all little girls go through that phase, where they ask way too many questions. Sometimes it's cute, but sometimes...haha.

Yeah, I wrote the house elves like children in that sense. Their loyalty is supposed to lie with their Lestrange master, but makes sense that they'd gravitate towards their mistress because Rab is never home, and Alanna is. I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reviewing!

~Gabby


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