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Review:SpringTime says:
Hey! I finally have time to read and review, will get to two shots next. So Sorry that it took so long. The only thing I have to comment on is the time difference between the Longbottom birth and the Potter birth... arent they born within a day of each other... sorry just a canon thing that I figured I would point out.
Anyway... other than that I really enjoyed this chapter and am so eager to find out where she might have gone. I love that the house elves have changed their loyalties... that is wonderful, go Allana.
You conveyed her emotions so well, I only wish that Rab deserved her love. Poor girl. Anyway, onto Two Shots.

Author's Response: No problem, real life is busy for everyone. I'm just flattered that you are so faithful in following my stories. =]

Harry & Neville were born a month or less apart, I believe. Here, I mentioned Lily was "well-along", but I do realize that it doesn't go with canon because this chapter is in autumn and Harry was born in summer. Arrgh. Oh, well.

Rab is slimy, yes, but he can't help it! Haha, I guess I feel the need to defend him because I know his side of the story and so far, you don't. =] But I'm adding more in as the story progresses. Soon, you'll see what pressure he's under. =]

And the house elves are my favorite little comic relief thing. I just love them. :P Thanks for the review!

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