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Review:Alopex says:
I really enjoyed this story! It was exciting, gripping, tense. It really drew me in. Of course, the moment that I read Erik had been challenged to a duel, I knew what the sad outcome would be, but the duel nevertheless was exciting. The whole thing was a very enjoyable read. Gripping, as I said.

I do wish the story hadn't been written in italics. They are more difficult to read than ordinary type. I know it was a flashback of sorts, but almost everything was italicized. If you thought a separation was necessary (I don't), a * or horizontal break could have demarcated the final few lines and first few.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! :D

I'm so glad that you liked it; your compliments mean a lot to me.

I'll definitely reconsider the italics! :]

Thanks again.

--Emily


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