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Review:Lilith_of_elder_days says:
Wow...this is very good. I'm a big proponent of slash, and don't think it's recognized nearly enough as a respectable genre of fanfiction. Your story portrays the pain felt between these two very delicately. I enjoyed reading it. A few suggestions--go through the story and cull the cliches. Phrases like "only time could tell" don't really add anything to the story and you have so many great lines--I loved the one where you compare Draco's breath to dust--that I'm sure you can think of an adequate replacement.

Author's Response: :D Thank you for reviewing this!

I've never really done anything with slash before, but I've enjoyed reading some of the stories on this site. The thing I tried to aim for in this story was a realistic transition between their mutual hatred and suddenly wanting to be together, if only momentarily.

Yes... cliches can ruin stories, so I'll go through it and have a rummage around for any that could be lurking there! :D

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