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Review:Blissbug says:
Okay, I'm here because I simply could not wait to read more of your work, and I'm so glad I skipped ahead in my review queue because the very first line is brilliant and I'm absolutely crazy for you POV choice, you're writing it really well!

Who is this delicious potent woman? She's freaking great, so alive and intense and vivid! I am enthralled and jealous and angsty to read more with her. Pitty this is a one-shot because you've got a spot-on character here who deserves more than few thousand words.

But of those few thousand words, I am deeply impressed. You did such a good job with Sirius, I love your portral of him. He's real, he's flawed, he's magnetic! I've read far too many cheap easily written versions of this -- my favorite Maurader -- but yours makes him such a man! Woo girl *fans herself as she swoons with happy HP chills*

There's also the presence of an actual thought about back story here, and a lot of one-shots are lacking that. I think because of the tense and POV pick for this, I'm getting a solid platform from which I can suspend my belief styem and just go with the action. I was so throughly caught up in this story I forgot to look for detials to critique, so I have nothing here for you but praise.

Delicious, addictive, want more! I love this Gabby, great job!

12/10!!!

BB-This one is going into my favorites!

Author's Response: Whoa, 12/10?! That's the highest rating I've ever gotten. ;)

All this praise is going to my head, Bliss. Yes, the plotline is such that readers DO need to suspend their beliefs and just go with it - I'm glad the tense and POV hooked you. And Sirius is such a man? Of course he is. *faints* This is my first serious [lol] attempt at Sirius/OC, so I went through pains to make him right.

Here's a secret: the reason why a backstory was present is because it's real, to a certain degree. I based Tori off of myself, then tweaked it a bit from my exaggeration-prone imagination. :) So your delicious, potent, alive, intense, and vivid woman is actually mostly...me. ^_^ Of course, I appreciate your compliments two-fold because of it.

Glad you enjoyed this so much, and thanks again for being a great beta and reviewer!! =]

~Gabby


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