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Review:HarryPotter is my LIFE says:
First off, let me say that I re-read the last chapter and the edits made a big difference! Only a few typos left, and you can't get them all, right? :)

An enjoyable and informative second chapter. One thing I noticed was your lack or punctuation at the end of any dialogue. It doesn't exactly make the story any less intelligible, but technically it should be there.

McGonagall's introduction at the very beginning of the chapter has lots of run-on parts.

Throughout the chapter, there were typos here and there, again. But nothing a quick run through shouldn't fix.

And . . . I'm not sure if you're going with the AU angle here, or just completely forgot, but Snape (so long as you're talking about the one we know and hate from the books) was killed by Nagaini in Deathly Hallows . . .

On the other hand, I very much enjoyable the bonding between Albus and James - very similar, the "hit it and quit it" type. :D
And I'm totally looking forward to reading about their shenanigans. :D

Author's Response: Thanks so much, you rock 4 reading my story, my internet is on and off, but I try to update as much as I can. I don't do too much now but I always find time for harry. I do lots of stuff on fanfiction, but i am addicted to hp

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