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Review:CocoapuffShooter says:
Onna asked me to check out your first chapter to give my suggestions. Congrats on a new series, that is always challenging.

I didn't look too closely at the series specs before I began reading. I'm assuming this is either an AU (alternate universe) or takes place before HBP, where Dumbledore is killed... I'll assume AU. My main suggestions at this point are purely editorial. You don't have to make every sentance it's own paragraph, and I'd check it for spelling and punctuation before posting it. So far it seems interesting for the strangeness of the situation you have presented.

Author's Response: yay! Thank you so much for reviewing. It is AU but i don't think i marked it. Basically i kinda skipped their 6th year and started it at the summer before 7th. i feel that we should give them one normal boring year just to keep them sane. lol. im new so i'm learning. thank you so much, you leave really good reviews.

~LiZbEtH*cArSoN~


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