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Review:Chapstick says:
I haven't come across a oneshot like this before - one that doesn't result in some serious raunchiness (not that I have a problem with that, lol) or some significant shouting match. Much like the ideal kiss described at the beginning of this chapter. Sirius' elusiveness and the main girl's thought sequence are both very cool, very well written. Comprehensibility is appreciated.

I must say, if you decide to make this into a longer story, I'd be very interested in reading that. But only if you're passionate about writing it. Writing without passion always produces something less that what it could have been, trust me, I write too. But you probably knew that already.

I'm rambling. Sorry. I liked this oneshot, though. Very much.

-Chanelle

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. The challenge was about an accidental kiss, and I tried to stay away from the norm. It was something I really enjoyed writing actually and I've had a few thoughts about developing it, though I won't attempt anything until one of my other stories is finished. I just don't have time. But yes. Thank you so much for your lovely review! That really made my day.

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