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Review:Lyn Midnight says:
Here it comes, THE sound: Awww. :P That was so sweet! I loved the bittersweet color of this one-shot. It’s really good writing, too! There were several parts that really struck me as true. My favorite one was the moment when she realized ‘what it meant to love’.

Also, there were at least a few winner lines in the story which I highlighted and read a few times for good measure.

I also appreciated the occassional slip of the word ghost, which gave the story a veiled atmosphere, and Tonks’s thoughts felt so alive and strong, being so filled with emotion. And all those things she loved about him, her doubts, and her self-pity, and finally, her resolution – they all fell into place and made her, and him, and them, simply real. Especially the end, so simple, and yet so powerful.

I spotted just one typo: Greying hair, SCARED face, glum moods.
That’s it. Paradoxically, the best stories don’t need too many words. :P

Author's Response: It\\\'s supposed to be scarred because he has so many scars on his face - one R would mean scared as though he\\\'s frightened. :/ Ach, the English language is murder sometimes.

It\\\'s quite wonderful that you thought this story so sweet. It felt so depressing to me, at least until the end when Tonks came back to her old self and vowed to have him (that\\\'s my favourite bit). :D The one-shots are not easier to write, but they do turn out better, perhaps because I\\\'m not forcing myself so much. They\\\'re more natural in style and content, which is why I\\\'m usually more proud of them. ^_^

Thanks very much for taking the time to read and review, Lyn! :D

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