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Review:LonelyStar says:
Hey! LonelyStar from the forums with the review you requested ^_^

Wow - this one-shot was brilliant. I really did love it, I even added it my favourites. So this isn't going to be a review but rather me going on about what I liked in this.

Your banner and summery was good - they were perfect to grab a reader's attention and get them to read the one-shot. And your opening sentences for this were good too. They were interesting and well choosen on your part, and got the reader interested in what was going to happen in this.

Deciding to write in second person was another good choice you made, because it added to the one-shot and made it more enjoyable to read. And your characterisations were great. Your characters were believable and had dept to them. I don't think I spotted any grammar mistakes, and spelling seemed to be perfect. Pace, flow and length were good as well. Really, I don't think you made any mistakes in writing this.

Good work in writing this :) It's great. And if you want to request another review of me please do.

10/10

Author's Response: Thank you so much! This has made my day :D I\'m so glad you liked it, and thank you for adding it to your favorites!

The banner is fabulous, yes, all credit to hannah17@TDA for that :D I love who she chose as Dominique, she\'s perfect. And the summary was given to me by the challenger - I just changed it a little to suit the tense.

The second person was actually really fun to write in, I really enjoyed it. And I\'m glad you liked the characterisations, I\'m not very experienced in writing angsty people, so it\'s really flattering that you liked them :) And all credit for perfect grammar goes to PenguinsWillReignSupreme, my beta; she\'s amazing :)

Thank you so much for the amazing review, honestly, it\'s made my week! Thank you so much! And I will definitely re-request when I have a new one-shot up :) Thanks again!

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