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Review:rachm34 says:
Hey there. First off let me apologise for how long my review is taking. Time has been so inconvienent for me in the last week with work and stuff. But I also want to just inform you I only have time to write a first review for only this chapter. It will probably be pretty short but I can tell you right away that the opening was definitely great!

Also. If you want me to continue reviewing this story please wait three days before requesting again. My one rule... It's pretty simple, right?

I LOVE the beginning. Your characterizations are pleasant. It is a little hard to believe that the Potter's house is always happy. I mean not every family is expiriencing Bliss every moment of their lives.

I love the characterizations of everyone. I love how you made Lily a girl who loves quidditch. She's definitely taking after her dad and mum.

Their reactions were perfect, and spot on. Great job. The only thing I could suggest is the fact that you seem like they have a perfect family. I don't think you should do that. You could say they are happy but every family does have some flaws. Humans are not perfect.

Fantastic start!

Author's Response: I completely understand.

Thank you so much for your great compliments. I didn\\\'t mean to make them seem like the \\\'perfect\\\' family, but I did want them to seem happy since this is a disruption of their lives.

Thank you for the lovely review!

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