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Review:tonksloveswerewolves says:
woooho! Hooray for no more hiatus!! Although, I do have on little bit of constructive criticism: Hermione wouldn't be showing yet at the end of her first trimester, at least not as much as you have it. Most people don't even know they're pregnant for the first month or two, and in the third month they might start gaining more weight, but they don't significantly start showing until the 4th or 5th month. ^^ Just thought I'd point it out, since I'm a nit-picky freak. Other than that, I do REALLY love this story! 9/10

Author's Response: Thank you for the constructive criticism! I looked back through the chapter to find the particular reference you are siting and am guessing it is when Hermione refers to her stomach as a watermelon? I actually have done quite a bit of research on the norms of pregnancy (haha) and, at that point in the story, I like to think Hermione was speaking in hyperbole. She is definitely not as big as a watermelon yet, but she is showing enough for her to feel paranoid about people noticing.

I am really glad you brought this to my attention and in future chapters I will make sure to give a more literal description of her appearance! So glad you like the story. Please keep leaving helpful reviews - I really appreciate them! :)


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