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Review:celticbard says:
Hi morgana!
It's celticbard, from eHPf, here to review as requested. ^_^

Well, the rising action in this chapter is positively wonderful! I found myself sitting on the edge of my seat while reading. Everything is really coming together. Draco is starting to prove his loyalty and Harry, I sense, is finally getting closer to one of the Horcruxes. The appearance of Snape and Trelawney really worked so well in this chapter. They were both perfectly in-character and I simply love what you've done with Snape. I could just picture him working quietly in a Muggle bookstore, retiring to his quiet apartment at night to listen to opera and drink fine red wine. You certainly have him down-pat. And Trelawney's drunken ramblings were hilarious. Poor Harry, he's having quite a rough time stuck with her in the Room of Requirement.

Draco has continued to earn my appreciation in this chapter. He really is trying, isn't he? Good for him!

As always, it was a pleasure reading this chapter, morgana. Out of curiosity, how long will this fic be? Do you have any more chapters planned out? Please feel free to drop by my queue again and request another spot. I can't wait to find out just how Harry escapes Hogwarts. ^_^ Take care and have a good weekend!


Author's Response: Oh, thanks so much. I\\\'m quite flattered that you find I\\\'m still maintaining the intrigue. Draco well, he seems to be moving in the right direction but he will really be put to the test later on.

I\\\'m particularly pleased that you like the Snape scene. I tried quite hard to imagine him in a Muggle context. He\\\'s an important character in this story also, although his allegiance is hardly a mystery now. Trelawney\\\'s presence in the Room of Requirement is relevant to the plot but she won\\\'t be a central character overall. I had a bit of fun describing her in such drunken state. Poor Sybil! I wonder if you have any ideas as to who might have sealed the room. Hopefully, not the most obvious.

I think this story is going to end up being a very long one. I\\\'m currently working on chapter 32, in which I have been stuck for months. I decided on the ending before DH was published and will stick to it. I have several plots worked out but not the whole thing. In a way its harder now after DH because when it comes to the points I haven\\\'t had planned for ages, often I don\\\'t know whether to follow canon or to depart from it. Yes, the quill is important however Harry still hasn\\\'t got a clue as to where it is. The message is also very relevant and complicates matters a great deal. I plan to include some European locations when it comes to the Horcrux hunt.

I\\\'m so pleased you are enjoying this! Thanks sooo much!

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