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Review:RonsGirlFriday says:
This is beautiful! I'm sitting here fighting back tears. You write a very good Molly, and anything relating to Fred always gets me. The ending was so sad, and I loved the last line. It's true, too -- every time someone looks at George, even George himself, they see Fred.

"A mother's pain is greatest when her children are in pain, for having children is to have your heart outside yourself."
--That quote, especially, was really well-worded, and it sounds so much like Molly.

This is an awesome idea for a story collection, and I can't wait to see the future chapters! Here are a few ideas of characters that might be good to work with:

Percy -- he went through an interesting personal journey over the course of the war.
Also, Dennis Creevey (I'm pretty sure he didn't die, right? Just Colin).
McGonagall (any professor, really, although McGonagall would be interesting because she's generally a pretty controlled person, so she'd be fun to explore).
Andromeda Tonks.
One of the Malfoys.
Fleur.

Hmm...I'll stop now! Haha. But I'm really excited to see future installments!

10/10

Author's Response: Awww... thanks Melanie! I\\\'m so glad you liked it :) I wrote this one a while back, and I just couldn\\\'t resist editing and posting it. Originally it was just a one shot, but I thought it would be interesting to insert different perspectives.
Thanks for your suggestions! I\\\'m keeping note of them and they\\\'ll definitely be on there.
~Shiloh

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