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Review:RonsGirlFriday says:
Glad to see another chapter! I am really enjoying this story.

I wouldn't be too worried about this not looking like a romance yet. Sometimes it's nice for things to develop slowly, and I think it fits here, considering Kate's hesitance and resentment towards Charlie. On that note, I'm happy they have a dinner date. Or something similar to a dinner date, at least.

Charlie is just really oblivious, though. It's sort of maddening, actually. Can he really be so dense? Maybe it's just willful ignorance.

The whole thing with Kate's access being denied is a good twist, and I'm eager to see how it works out -- particularly because I got a feeling that it wasn't just a mix-up in paperwork. But I guess I'll have to wait and find out. :-)

Bainbridge gives me the creeps. Good job with him! You seem really versatile at writing different kinds of characters, and the diversity is part of what's making this story so enjoyable.

Great chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you! I am glad you like the different characters, and they come off distinct enough to me memorable. Bainbridge is a sleaze, but surprising fun to write. I have been worried the whole thing is moving too slow, but once the story picks up, my intention is to have it run pretty fast, so maybe it will all balance out in the end. And hopefully Charlie won\\\'t come off as an idiot for too much longer. Thanks again for the review!!

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