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Review:IloveNeville says:
Oh wow, this was amazing! I really like how this could very easily have fit into canon and would have been a good reason for Peter to have betrayed the Potters. For retribution against James. It kept me on my toes and I like how in the beginning, you created mystery by referring to Lily as Scarlet and saying that Scarlet's husband killed Harriet. It made us, the readers, feel anger towards this unknown man, until we realize that it's James and that it was an accident. Therefore giving a perfect reason for Peter's betrayal. Really great job!

I liked the characterization of Harriet, she sounded really sweet, and anyone who can put up with Peter Pettigrew must be a saint. It was really good how you connected Harriet to the naming of baby Harry. I like stories that give an explanation to things from the books.

It was good that you did it through the perspective of Peter. Not many stories really do follow Peter's perspective and that's what makes this a great story. You're helping us try to understand the fourth Marauders who went astray. Helping us relate to him as a person and not just some traitor.

Great job!

Author's Response: awww thank you xxx

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