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Review:RonsGirlFriday says:
Hello Kristen!! *hugs*

I really liked the storytelling feel of this -- like I was sitting by a fire listening to an old story. At some points, it even had sort of a fairytale feel to it -- I'm not sure if that's what you were going for, but I liked it! And I figured out at the end that it was Ted telling the story instead of a random narrator, and that was a nice twist.

The theme, about the New Year being a time for new beginnings and reconciliation, was lovely, especially as you applied it to Andromeda and Narcissa, although I wondered why Andromeda waited so many years to try to make up with Narcissa. Maybe she was scared or worried, but once she grew old she wanted to do it because she knew she didn't have much time left?

The image of Andromeda sitting all alone in her house and thinking to herself, was sad, but I liked it a lot. Especially when you described it as "much too large for an old soul like hers to live in." You have a nice way with language. :-)

I really enjoyed reading this. Off to read your other stuff!

Melanie

Author's Response: Thanks Melanie!! And yeah, I was going for that. She knew she didn't have enough time, and she didn't want to go on without making at least some sort of effort! Thank you my darling!!

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