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Review:Reyes91 says:
First thing first: Thank you for taking up my challenge and making a great fic out of it!

Now, I am the first to say that Ron/Hermione is not my favorite couple due to the fact that I don't like Ron. But, I can honestly say that you have moved me to like them a little in fanfiction. I love the way you portrayed Ron. I loved how there were no arguments between him and Hermione. It was all just pure fluff and stuff. Ha, that rhymed!

Anyway, I think it was absolutely sweet how he asked Hermione to marry him and it was very blunt, just how Ron is. This was my favorite line: 'The wails of the infant in the background were the sweetest music to ever reach his ears.' It was just how a new father would feel and was the perfect ending to the story.

All in all, you have a great story here. The song fit in perfectly and the characterization was flawless. Great job!



Author's Response: Wow! Thank you so so so so so much! I honestly did a dance and squealed throughout the time it took me to read this review, as well as a bit after :]

You know, Ron and Hermione argue A LOT in JKR's novels, so why include it here? I felt like it was really unnecessary, especially as it was alluded to, I'm glad to see that you included that here. There is so much more to this relationship than that. Ron is really bad at portraying his emotions, but there's nothing wrong with that... if you take that in stride it's just how he is, and personally I see it as an endearing quality. Though his temper does put me off a bit ;]

I'm glad you thought the characterizations were so well done. It brings me so much relief to hear that! And I don't know where that sentence came from... guess I just thought about seeing my goddaughter for the first time and tried to put that into what I know about parenting.

Thank you so much for the lovely review! I really appreciate it and your lovely compliments. Fantastic challenge! :D

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