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Review:ladymblack says:
Dave,

As always, another bittersweet chapter. Lots of laughs but a few sniffles stuck in there too! I don't recall reading the marmalade bit with Arthur in LtLA, so I'm guessing that's all new.I laughed out loud at that one. Charlie's was interesting. We know so little about him. I hesitate to involve him much in my own writing just because of that fact. I don't feel like I know him well enough to capture him the way people expect. But I think he was the perfect Weasley to use for those memories, perhaps because of that reason. I dearly wish we could have seen more of Neville's memories. For some reason I always love anything he's in.

Thanks so much, and I look forward to the next chapter!

Maria

Author's Response: Maria,

The toaster/marmalade reference is made in the chapter where Harry and Ginny fight their way out of the wards. It was used as a security question, and then later Harry explains it a little, but there was not much to it.

Charlie is a good character to play with for that very reason. JKR told us very little about him, so he''s a clean slate. An author can take him anywhere.

Neville's memory had to be about Ginny. I see the two of them sharing a bond because they led the DA/resistance at Hogwarts during the war. I do have another memory for Neville, but it didn't fit here. I may write it as a one shot. Not sure.

Thanks for reading and the comments.

Dave


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