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Review:HogwartsGirl618 says:
Hey Jill! =)
First- this is an awesome one-shot. You are the characterization queen. The situations you create are all so fitting to the characters, and you carry their personas into the dialogue.

"I love you Hermione, and I was wondering if you would marry me?" BEST Ron proposal. I jumped up and down like a maniac. =) Very, very fitting for his character. In vernacular. Brilliant.

The way you convey emotion, and how the characters build walls around them and others tear them down- you really get a sense of the way they interact. When Ron finds Hermione, and she tries to rebuff him- then she tries to defend her actions only to realize she was wrong- SO well-written.

The way you moved in time was completely clear- a lot of one shots can be confusing, but I think the reader is really able to follow the sequence in the order you presented it. He sees her in the garden, rewinds to earlier that day, then it moves forward.

I'm not a big Ron/Hermione shipper, but the way you wrote this gave me many a warm fuzzy =) Ron is quite a humorous character, isn't he? ;-) And you wrote Hermione in a very pure form; she was really true to her character. She's independent, determined.

And it was the cutest thing that Ron wasn't able to go in the room. And the last line made me smile =)

Lovely, lovely one-shot! It's going in my favorites =D
And I love the song! Your writing is always so amazing! *sends hugs*

< x : - ) Sarah

Author's Response: Sarah, your reviews always make me smile like a fool. You're so kind and thank you so very very much. I'm so pleased that you enjoyed this!! And favorited?! Wow! Thank you! I'm touched.

I'm SO glad I got Hermione in this... she really is the most difficult for me to write. And... I don't even know what to say. I appreciate everything you did for this story! You're really so wonderful. Thank you again! :D

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