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Review:GlisteningGold says:
Hi! It's been a looong time since you guys updated but because this chapter is really good I'm in a forgiving mood :D I really loved how Sirius kept on pointing out how sexy french is. I couldn't help but notice some mistakes in the french tho
Oui Mademoiselle Loch, moi et ma soeur je t’aime le Francais
What you said is Yes miss Loch, me and my sister I love you the french. Also in french you usually say madame to a teacher, but I'm not really sure if you want to change that because you might want to point out how teenagerisch the teacher is. I would change it into Oui madame Loch, nous adoront le français!
Un Elefant, I think in french you write elephant with ph but I could be wrong so you might want to check that.
Jacqués, I'm not sure about this one either because it might be on purpose but usually you don't use an accent on Jacques. I'm sorry if I'm annoying you with all these corrections and stuff :) Like I said your story is really good.

Author's Response: Thanks very much for your review :D

And also an uber thank you for noticing our mistakes in French. Like we said in the chapter we only used google translator seeing as we can\\\'t remember any of our secondary school french lessons (seeing as lauren didn\\\'t even take french, she took german, but whatever...)

So a big big thanks for that and we\\\'ll be redoing that when we have the time.

Thanks again, and we\\\'re glad you like the story!

-becky and lauren (:


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