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Review:Pretty Purple Pelican says:
What a brilliant opening to the story. Of course Severus would try to boost his confidence by losing his virginity. That was a remarkably realistic thing to do. And I literally died when her name was Rhonda Vane. Like mother, like daughter, I see. I love your writing, as always. You always do such brilliant, new things like this spell for guilt. That would be a wonderful one to throw on James, and I'm glad to see that he totally succumbed to it.

HAHAHA. Plopper. I love that. That's great. What's so wonderful about the dialogue here is that you can sense the awkward tension even just from reading it. I love it!

Wonderful ending, too. I loved how human your characters truly are. I think one of my favorite moments was when James said, "She judges everyone." It really took away from Lily's usual Mary-Sue persona, and I loved that. Great story! I think this is one of my favorite things I've read from you! :)

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